cooler than houseflies
A rebuttal to Grace Zhen's poem "drifting."

Cooler than houseflies
People are cooler than houseflies
Can houseflies make pies
from apple trees in the fall?
Can houseflies make people comply
when citizens deter from the law?
Can houseflies make shoes
that keep people's toes cozy as it snows?
Can houseflies make stools
and allow people short become tall?
Can houseflies make 3D printers beavers
to ship them to students afar?
People are cooler than houseflies


Hi Daniel!
ReplyDeleteYou make a good point. Beautifully written poem too C:
- Grace